Friday, 8 March 2013

Homework 08.03.2013


Your homework for this week is:

Write your sentences on this post as a comment but I will not publish them until I have received homework from everybody.

Mr D

30 comments:

  1. 1. The obese/overweight/large bellied man was trying to lose weight.
    2. She was afraid/anxious/concerned that she would not be invited to the party.
    3. Fiona strolled/journeyed/ambled to the park to meet her friends.
    4. Peter yelled/screamed/shouted,"No. I dislike/loathe/dispise brussel sprouts.I'm not going to eat them!"
    5. Shelley thought how wonderful/amazing/good her birthday cake was as she gobbled/chomped/scoffed it with her family.
    6. Jessica told her pals/mates/buddies how cool/awesome/smashing the black hole at Alton Towers was.
    7. I was amazed/mind-blown/shocked when I won first prize at the raffle.
    8. Toby's Grandma was extremely/really/highly delighted/over-joyed/glad with her birthday present.
    9. The massive/enormous/huge bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10. The school outing/day out/journey promised to be a(n) enjoyable/thrilling/inspiring one.

    Joshua

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  2. 1. The tubby/elephantine/fleshy man was trying to lose weight.
    2. She was apprehensive/distressed/tormented that she would not be invited to the party.
    3. Fiona strolled/marched/trudged to the park to meet her friends.
    4. Peter yelled/barked/screeched "No I despise/dislike/execrate brussel sprouts! I am not going to eat them".
    5. Shelley thought how delightful/pleasing/charming her birthday cake was as she devoured/consumed/munched it with her family.
    6. Jessica told her mates/companions/crew how excellent/splendid/fine the Black Hole at Alton Towers was.
    7. I was astonished/amazed/astounded when I won first prize at the raffle.
    8. Toby's grandma was exceedingly/highly/jolly satisfied/delighted/gratified with her birthday present.
    9. The colossal/immense/abundant bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10. The school voyage/expedition/foray promised to be a titillating/sensational/rip-roaring one.

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  3. 1.The obese/huge/big man was trying to lose weight
    2.She was anxious/scared/frightened that she would not be invited to the party
    3.Fiona strolled/ran/jogged to the park to meet her friends
    4.Peter wailed/screamed/shouted,"No! I despise/loath/disgust brussel sprouts!I am not going to eat them!!"
    5.Shelly thought how lovely/beautiful/brilliant her birthday cake was as she devoured/chewed/munched it with her family.
    6.Jessica told her mates/pals/buddys how amazing/spectacular/marvelous the Black hole at Alton Towers.
    7.I was shocked/amazed/confused when I won first prize at the raffle.
    8.Tobys grandmother was extremely/especially/genuinely impressed/satisfied/happy with her birthday present!
    9. The big/huge/enormous bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10. The school expedition/cuise/voyage promised to be an amazing/exhilerating/appealing one.

    Those are my answers to your questions Mr D

    Joe

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  4. Well done Joe, Joshua and Theo for your homework!

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  5. The huge/obese/overweight man was trying to lose weight.

    She was scared/nervous/anxious that she wouldn't be invited to the party.

    Fiona ran/jogged/rushed to the park to meet her friend.

    Peter shouted/announced/mumbled "No!I HATE Brussels sprouts!I am not going to eat them!"

    Shelley thought how wonderful/amazing/fantastic her birthday cake was and she enjoyed/shared/demolished it with her family.

    Jessica told her mates/buddies/classmates how great/fab/fantastic the Black Hole at Aton Towers was.

    I was excited/shocked/happy when i won first prize at the raffle.

    Toby's Grandma was definitely/extremely/most thankful/surprised/greatful with her birthday present.

    The big/huge/massive bulldozer held up all the traffic.

    The school adventure/outing/daytrip promised to be an great/fantastic/epic one.

    Mason Simpkins

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  6. 1.)the obese man wax trying to lose weight.
    2.)she was concerned that she wouldn't be invited to the party.
    3.) Fiona strolled to the park to meet her friends.
    4.) peter exclaimed " no! i despise Brussels sprouts! i am not going to eat them.
    5.) Shelley thought how amazing her birthday cake was as she consumed it with her family.
    6.) Jessica told her mates how epic the black hole was at Alton towers.
    7.)i was amazed when i won first prize in the raffle.
    8.)toby's grandma was extremely thrilled with her birthday present.
    9.)the huge bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10.)the school excursion promised to be an thrilling one.

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  7. Well done Mason and Jacob for your homework!

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  8. the overweight man was trying to lose weight
    she was panicing that she would not be invited to the party
    fiona strolled to the park to meet her freinds
    peter stated that he disliked brussell sprouts
    shelly thought how lovely her birthday cake was as she consumed it with her family
    jessica told her mates how ace the black hole at alton towers was
    i was amazed when i won first prize at the raffle
    tobys grandma was overjoyed with her birthday present
    the gigantic bulldozer held up all the traffic
    the school journey promised to be a groovy one by callum

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  9. The football match was very poor (disappointing/dirty/untidy)

    I always have my tea at 6pm (regularly/usually/daily)

    Micheal inspected the crime scene (investigated/viewed/surveyed)

    our wet washing is drying on the line (damp/moist/soggy)

    The lighting in my hallway was shining brightly (glowing/radiant) (blazing/brilliantly/vividly)

    The ball was bouncing on the ground (rebounding/recoiling)

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  10. Well done Callum and Lewis for your homework!

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  11. Cameron
    1.The over weight man was trying to lose weight.
    2.She was scared that would not be invited to the party.
    3.Fiona ran to the park to meet her friend.
    4.Peter shouted "no! I do not like Brussels sprouts! I am not going to eat them!"
    5.Shelley thought how amazing her birthday cake was as she chomped it with her family.
    6.Jessica told her mates how nice the Black Hole at Alton Towers was.
    7.I was amazed when I won first prize at the raffle.
    8. Toby's Grandma was incredibly happy with her birthday present.
    9.The enormous bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10.The school outing promised to be an thrilling one.

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  12. (1)The stout/plump/obese man was trying to lose weight.
    (2)She was frighted/terrifed/tense that she would not be invited to the party.
    (3)Fiona strut/stroll/stride to the park to meet here friends.
    (4)Peter spoken no I despies/loath brussels spourts i am not going to eat them.
    (5)Shelley thought how good/gracious/gentle her birthday cake was as she feed/chew/swallow it whith a family.
    (6) jessica told her friend mate/pal how welcome/wonderful the black hole at alton towers was.
    (7)I was amaze/shock/stun when i won frist prize at the rattle.
    (8)Tobys grandmother was smiple/specal/happy/sattifed with her birthday present.
    (9)The huge/enrmous/massive bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    (10)The school journey to be an astonishing trip. By gaganpreet singh,

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  13. Mr D I liked doing this homework





    by gaganpreet

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  14. Well done Cameron and Gaganpreet!

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  15. 1.obese overweight chubby. 2.concerned anxious afraid. 3.ran skipped sprinted. 4.screeched fumed. 5.detest loathe dislike. 6.lovely wonderful delightful. 7.munched enjoyed. 8.mates company. 9.exiting exhilarating fun. 10.shocked grateful pleased.11.extremely.12.exiting.13. huge gigantic. 14.excursion visit. 15. perfect fantastic fully packed. by Morgan 6jd

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  16. 1. The lardy/oversized porkster/obese man was trying to lose weight.
    2. She was troubled/anxious/stressed that she would not be invited to the party.
    3. Fiona strode/marched/hiked to the park to meet her friends.
    4. Peter shouted/screamed/moaned, "No! I despise/dislike/recoil from Brussel Sprouts. I am not going to eat them".
    5. Shelley thought how awesome/amazing/epic her birthday cake was as she consumed/nibbled/munched on it with her family.
    6. Jessica told her companions/buddies/pals how epic/sick/wicked the Black Hole at Alton Towers was.
    7. I was astonished/astounded/shocked when I won the first prize at the raffle.
    8. Toby's Grandma was acutely/awfully/absolutely happy/satisfied/fulfilled with her birthday present.
    9. The massive/gigantic/big bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10. The school outing/adventure/hike promised to be a spine chilling/thrilling/eye popping one.

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  17. Well done Morgan and Reuben!

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  18. Mr D where do you write your homework on?

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  19. Hi Leo, you post your homework on here, where you have posted your question. Mr D

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  20. the obese/overweight/exralarge man tryed to lose weight.

    she was distressed/upset/apprehensive that she would not get invited to the party.

    fiona travled/moved/tracked to the park to meet her friends.

    peter quoted/shouted/spoke,"No i detest/dislike/ brussle sprouts!i am not going to eat them".

    shelly thought how gracious/lovley/pretty her birthday cake was as she scoffed/enjoyed/shared it with her family.
    Jessica told her allies/acquaintances/supporters/ how great/amaxing/wonderfull the Black Hole was at Alton Towers.
    I was gobsmacked/astonished/flabbergasted when I won first prise at the raffle.
    Toby's Grandma was totally exstatic/really happy/wonderfully grateful
    with her birthday present.
    The huge/enourmous/gigantic bulldoser held up traffic.
    The school day out/journey/vacation/ promised to be a brilliant/supberb/tremedous one.
    JACK

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  21. Well done Jack for posting your homework!

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  22. The obese/chubby/plump man as trying to lose weight.
    She was distressed/troubled/apprehensive that she would not be invited to the party.
    Fiona travelled/moved/paced to the park to meet her friends.
    Peter mentioned/quoted/spoke "No i detest/dislike/refute Brussels sprouts!I am not going to eat them!"
    Shelley thought how decent/perfect/gracious her birthday cake was as she munched/fed/noshed it with her family.
    Jessica told her allies/acquaintances/admires how amazing/great/brilliant the Black hole at Alton towers was.
    I was astonished/shocked/disturbed when i won first prize on the raffle.
    G

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  23. 1)the fat man was trying to lose weight.chuby,large,bulky.
    2)she was worried that she would not be invited to the party.nervous,bothered,afraid.
    3)Fiona walked to the park to meet her friends.wandered,crawl,stroll.
    4)Peter said"no!i hate brussel sprouts! I'm not going to eat them"!dislike,despise,loathe.
    5)shelley thought how nice her birthday was as she ate with her family.admirable,delicious,pleasing,swallowed,chewed.
    6)jessica told her friend how good the black hole was at alton towers was.buddy,mate,ally.amazing,great,brilliant.
    7)I was suprised when i won first prize at the raffle.amazed,startled,bewildered.
    8)Tobys grandma was very pleased with here birthday presant.realy,exact,undoubted.charmed,content.
    9)The large bulldover held up all the traffic.huge,big,meager.
    10)the school trip promised to be an exciting one.outing,journey.inspiring,enjoyable,thrilling
    burdah

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  24. The obese/large/chuby man was trying to loose weight.

    She was terrerfied/frightentend/nerouse that she would not be invited to the party.

    Fiona strolled/ran/amble to the park to meet her freinds.

    Peter mumbled/spoke/menstioned he i dislike/can't stand/detest brussels sprouts i am not going to eat it.

    Shelly thought how loverly/delious/scrumstiouse her birthday cake as she gobbled/devoured/scofed it with her family.

    Jesica told her mates/pals/buddies how awsome/great/wonderfull the black hole was at altontowers.

    I was amazed/astonished/chuffed when i won first prize at the raffle.

    Tobys grandma was happy/exstremly/so exstatic/exsitedly/over joyed with her birthday present.


    The collosal/huge/inormus bulldozer help up all the traffic.

    The school outing/excertion/jerney promised to be an fun/thrilling/ breathtaking.

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  25. 1. The Overweight man was trying to lose weight
    2. She was anxious that she would not be invited to the party
    3. Fiona ran quickly to the park to meet her friends
    4. Peter shouted "No! I really hate Brussels sprouts! I am not going to eat them
    5. Shelley thought how delicious her birthday cake was as she gobbled it up with her family
    6. Jessica told her Mates how Awesome the Black hole was at Alton Towers
    7. I was shocked when I won first prize at the raffle
    8. Toby's Grandma was extremely happy with her birthday present
    9. The giant bulldozer held up all the traffic
    10.The school Adventure promised to be an epic one

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  26. The obiest-beefy-bulky man was trying to loose weight

    she was worried-anxios-concerned-nervious that she would not be invited to the party

    Fiona strolled-paraded-hiked to the park

    peter screamed-spoken-exclaimed no! i despise-badly do not like Brussels sprouts i am not going to eat them

    shelly thought how nice- beautiful-pretty her cake was as she bit- gobble up her cake with her family

    Jessica told her friends-mates-bffs how good -cool-amazing how ride at Alton towers was.

    I was astounded -gob smacked- astonished when I won the first prize in the raffle

    Toby’s grandma was very-incredibly -extremely pleased- delighted with her birthday present

    The large-outsized-huge bulldozer geld up the traffic

    The school trip-visit-journey promised to be a good-amazing-super one

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  27. the humongous/gigantic/obese man was trying to lose weight.

    she was scared/anxious/apprehensive that she would not be invited to the party.

    fiona was trudged/strolled/ran to the park to meet her friends.

    peter screamed/screeched/shouted no i dislike/envy/hatred brossel sprots.i am not going going to eat them.

    shelly thought how yummy/heavenly/delicious her birthday cake was as she gobbled/digested/absorved it with her family.

    jessica told her pals/buddies/schoolmates how /great/wonderfull/fantastic the black hole in alton towers were.

    i was dazzled/amazed/astonished to win the first prize in the raffle.

    tobys parents were so/really/ever so satisfied/happy/cheerfull of her present.

    the huge/big/massive bulldozet held up all the traffic.

    the school adventure/journey/visit promised to be a cool/wonderfull/amazing one. from maisha.



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  28. The obese/plump/large man was trying to lose weight.

    She was concerned/scared/anxious that she would not be invited to the party.

    Fiona strolled/marched/ambled to the park to meet her friends.

    Peter declared/cried/stated "No! I despise/detest/loath Brussels sprouts! I am not going to eat them!"

    Shelly thought how delicious/lovely/fine her birthday cake was and she munched/gobbled/scoffed it with her family

    Jessica told her mates/pals/buddy's how fantastic/amazing/excellent the Black Hole was at Alton Towers.

    I was amazed/shocked/stunned when I won first prize at the fair.

    Toby's Grandmother was really/extremely/truly grateful/thrilled/delighted with her birthday present.

    The massive/gigantic/huge bulldozer held up all the traffic.

    The school outing/visit/excursion promised to be an amazing/thrilling/breathtaking one.

    Sorry its late Mr D :)

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  29. 1. The over weight/chubby/obese man was trying to lose weight.
    2.She was frightened/anxious/nervous that she would not be invited to the party.
    3.Fiona strolled/trotted/stepped to the park to meet her friends.
    4.Peter announced/spoken/aforementioned, No! I hate Brussels sprouts! I am not going to eat them!"
    5.Shelley thought how lovely/delightful/pleasant her birthday cake was as she gobbled/munched/consumed it with her family.
    6.Jessica told her buddy/pal/mate how great/fabulous/glorious the black hole at Alton towers.
    7.I was shocked/stunned/amazed when I won first prize at the raffle.
    8.Toby's grandma was highly/extremely/jolly happy/thrilled/glad with her birthday present.
    9.The huge/enormous/gigantic bulldozer held up all the traffic.
    10.The school day out/visit/outing promised to be an mind blowing/sensational/impressive one

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